Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Spanish term or phrase:
comportamientos sanos en higiene y nutrición
English translation:
healthy habits in children\'s hygiene and nutrition
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Lydianette Soza
Jul 22, 2013 23:41
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Spanish term
comportamientos sanos en higiene y nutrición
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Fortalecidos los comportamientos sanos en higiene y nutrición en niños para la prevención de enfermedades.
Mejorada la calidad de la educación primaria.
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Haciendo un analisis de fondo, hmmm no creo que se trate de "comportamientos" en cambio yo lo traduciría como prácticas (practices), sin embargo me gustaría conocer su opinión al respecto.
El texto lo he traducido de la siguiente manera pero me gustaría leer sugerencias, criticas (constructivas) ja..ja.
Saludos y de antemano gracias
Strengthened health-seeking "practices" of hygiene and nutrition in children to prevent diseases.
Mejorada la calidad de la educación primaria.
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Haciendo un analisis de fondo, hmmm no creo que se trate de "comportamientos" en cambio yo lo traduciría como prácticas (practices), sin embargo me gustaría conocer su opinión al respecto.
El texto lo he traducido de la siguiente manera pero me gustaría leer sugerencias, criticas (constructivas) ja..ja.
Saludos y de antemano gracias
Strengthened health-seeking "practices" of hygiene and nutrition in children to prevent diseases.
Proposed translations
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healthy habits in children's hygiene and nutrition
"habits" es una opción más natural del inglés.
Peer comment(s):
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Onidia (X)
: Sí y del español también en este contexto " hábitos de higiene" sería lo ideal.
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Gracias, Onidia!
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Stephen Singerman
: De acuerdo. "Healthy habits" sounds more natural to this native U.S. English speaker!
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Gracias Cadenzatrans!
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Nedra Rivera Huntington
: I would switch the word order a bit: healthy hygiene and nutrition habits in children
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Thank you Nedra.
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Lisa McCarthy
: Agree with word order suggested by Nedra
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Thanks Ms. McCarthy.
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Esmeralda Gómez
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Thanks Trad Siniestros
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healthy hygiene and nutrition behaviors / practices
As an American, I prefer these two to 'habits', though 'habits' is certainly acceptable. I think 'behaviors' in particular is very customary in this field.
12 hrs
(reinforced) children's healthy eating and hygiene habits
If, as it appears, this is a list of accomplishments achieved, brevity would seem to be desirable. In that spirit, I offer this suggestion.
"Improved", as noted in the discussion comment, could be another viable verb choice. "Reinforced," though, is closer in meaning to the original "fortalecidos", and more contextually appropriate than "strengthened" (since we talk of reinforcing habits, not strengthening them). Which verb is preferable depends on whether the author is saying that children needed to be taught the healthier alternatives, or they already practiced them to some degree but just needed reinforcement.
"Improved", as noted in the discussion comment, could be another viable verb choice. "Reinforced," though, is closer in meaning to the original "fortalecidos", and more contextually appropriate than "strengthened" (since we talk of reinforcing habits, not strengthening them). Which verb is preferable depends on whether the author is saying that children needed to be taught the healthier alternatives, or they already practiced them to some degree but just needed reinforcement.
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