Glossary entry (derived from question below)
English term or phrase:
informed and targeted
Chinese translation:
以便在更加了解业务现状的情况下，作出更有针对性的商业决定。
Added to glossary by
Libin PhD
Mar 19, 2002 09:27
22 yrs ago
English term
informed and targeted
Non-PRO
English to Chinese
Marketing
a comprehensive package of products and services to help vending operators and bottlers collect data from their vending machines and make more informed and targeted business decisions.
Proposed translations
(Chinese)
| 4 +1 | 以便在更加了解业务现状的情况下，作出更有针对性的商业决定。 |
Libin PhD
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| 4 +1 | 掌握信息，做出有针对性的商业决策。 |
Xiaoping Fu
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| 4 +1 | 明智的、必然的 |
Yang JS (X)
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| 4 | informed and targeted =信息掌握充分和目标明确的 |
Kevin Yang
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Proposed translations
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24 mins
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以便在更加了解业务现状的情况下，作出更有针对性的商业决定。
并在更加了解业务现状的情况下，作出更有针对性的商业决定。
这里需要采用词类转换的翻译方法，将informed从形容词转换为副词，使句子符合中文说话的习惯。
这里需要采用词类转换的翻译方法，将informed从形容词转换为副词，使句子符合中文说话的习惯。
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you for your help, Bin Li."
23 mins
Kevin Yang
Native in Chinese
Translation, Graphic Design, Copywriting
Native in: Chinese 
Works in: English to Chinese, Chinese to English, English to Korean, and 12 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
346
informed and targeted =信息掌握充分和目标明确的
make more informed and targeted business decisions = 制定出信息掌握更加充分和目标更加明确的决定
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Note added at 2002-03-19 10:03:44 (GMT)
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Sorry, missed a word in the previous translation:
make more informed and targeted business decisions = 制定出信息掌握更加充分和目标更加明确的商务决定
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Note added at 2002-03-19 10:03:44 (GMT)
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Sorry, missed a word in the previous translation:
make more informed and targeted business decisions = 制定出信息掌握更加充分和目标更加明确的商务决定
+1
1 hr
Xiaoping Fu
Canada
Canada
Native in Chinese
Canada
Professional Translating with Enthusiasm
Native in: Chinese 
Works in: Chinese to English, English, English to Chinese, and 1 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
2566
掌握信息，做出有针对性的商业决策。
同意 Bin Li 的思路。试著译得简洁一些：
...从售货机中采集数据，以便掌握信息，做出有针对性的商业决策。
...从售货机中采集数据，以便掌握信息，做出有针对性的商业决策。
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
ecindy
: agreed with you and Bin Li. Have another suggestion:獲得足夠信息，以作出更具針對性的商業決定。
37 mins
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+1
2 hrs
Yang JS (X)
Yang JS (X)
Quality, Speed and Economy
Works in: English to Chinese, Chinese to English, Japanese to Chinese, and 5 more.
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Related KudoZ points
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3
明智的、必然的
informed 明智的、知其所以然的
targeted 目标明确的
(Rendition need improvement)
**仅供参考、后果自负**
targeted 目标明确的
(Rendition need improvement)
**仅供参考、后果自负**
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