Jan 27, 2011 15:53
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Spanish term
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El paisaje caminado
Spanish to English
Art/Literary
Poetry & Literature
Es el título de un poema que describe un lugar: paisaje, patrimonio, historia... tengo varias opciones, pero estaría muy agradecido si me pueden dar alguna sugerencia.
Gracias de antemano.
Gracias de antemano.
Proposed translations
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| well-trodden landscape |
Rachel Fell
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Change log
Jan 27, 2011 15:59: Travelin Ann changed "Term asked" from "\"El paisaje caminado\"" to "El paisaje caminado"
Proposed translations
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Simon Bruni
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Spanish term (edited):
"El paisaje caminado"
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The trodden landscape
trodden is aptly poetic
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Note added at 3 mins (2011-01-27 15:57:25 GMT)
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The most famous example being: "tread softly for you tread on my dreams..."
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Or just: The trodden land
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Note added at 3 mins (2011-01-27 15:57:25 GMT)
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The most famous example being: "tread softly for you tread on my dreams..."
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Or just: The trodden land
Note from asker:
| Well-trodden should be OK. Thank you. |
Peer comment(s):
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Andrew Bramhall
: Even better the other way round- "The countryside trodden"
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Yvonne Gallagher
: trodden has negative connotation. Yeats was asking NOT to tread heavily...//and trample, press...
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It can have negative connotations, yes. However, it also merely means 'walk on'. Here's the Oxford definition: walk in a specified way. ▶(tread on) chiefly Brit. set one's foot down on top of. ▶walk on or along.
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Rachel Fell
: I think it's OK if you say "the well-trodden landscape" - cf. http://www.fanartreview.com/displaystory.jsp?id=225981 http://www.lancashire.gov.uk/environment/countryside/walking...
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Thanks Rachel :)
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Andrew Bramhall
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Spanish term (edited):
"El paisaje caminado"
"The countryside I/We trod/ covered"
??? No sé, pero un montón de opciones siempre que no haga falta ser demasiado literal.
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The intimate landscape / The landscape walked
"intimate" because I understand that the author visited the place at walking pace, when so many other people would have toured it by car
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The explored scenery/landscape
cheers
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Vicky Rengifo
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the walked landscape
just 'the walked landscape'
I really don't think it is necessary to re-invent a title.
I really don't think it is necessary to re-invent a title.
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Marian Vieyra
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The landscape I walked
Similar to Vicky's suggestion. Depending on who did the walking it could be I, we, they etc
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Karen Chalmers
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The well trodden country path.
Collocations of 'well trodden' and terms other than path are rare. This deviates from the title slightly but from what I understand of the context, it might work!
Example sentence:
The well trodden path will lead you on a beautiful walk through the forest.
8 hrs
The land (we/I/they) roved
One 'sees' a landscape, but 'experiences' or 'feels' the land. 'Balsámicos' and 'ardientes' suggest the use of other senses as well, not just sight. Is the poet an insider or an outsider in this poem?
28 mins
Yvonne Gallagher
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The countryside on foot/A Walker's Paradise
without further context
might add "covered" or "travelled" (Frost's poem, the road less-travelled comes to mind)
the second option, not literal, may work, depending on poem
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having now seen a part of the poem, it strikes me that it seems to be similar in declamatory language (and possibly in structure as well) as an ode
"An ode is typically a lyrical verse written in praise of, or dedicated to someone or something which captures the poet's interest or serves as an inspiration for the ode."
Ode (from the Ancient Greek ὠδή) is a type of lyrical verse. A classic ode is structured in three major parts: the strophe, the antistrophe, and the epode. ...
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ode - Cached - Similar
Hence, I suggest perhaps "Ode to the ----" with the name of the area (Galicia etc) inserted into the space. Is it really important that on foot/walking etc is included or can it be inferred?
ODE
might add "covered" or "travelled" (Frost's poem, the road less-travelled comes to mind)
the second option, not literal, may work, depending on poem
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Note added at 23 hrs (2011-01-28 15:32:04 GMT)
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having now seen a part of the poem, it strikes me that it seems to be similar in declamatory language (and possibly in structure as well) as an ode
"An ode is typically a lyrical verse written in praise of, or dedicated to someone or something which captures the poet's interest or serves as an inspiration for the ode."
Ode (from the Ancient Greek ὠδή) is a type of lyrical verse. A classic ode is structured in three major parts: the strophe, the antistrophe, and the epode. ...
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ode - Cached - Similar
Hence, I suggest perhaps "Ode to the ----" with the name of the area (Galicia etc) inserted into the space. Is it really important that on foot/walking etc is included or can it be inferred?
ODE
Reference comments
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Rachel Fell
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Reference:
well-trodden landscape
And, by virtue of the longest riverside walk in Britain (the Thames path is 184 miles long), you can do so with accompanying walkers.
Although the river flows through a tame, well-trodden landscape, once you are in the water, sunk below the pathes, roads and signposts, central England looks wild. You are surrounded by thick green English countryside.
http://www.guardian.co.uk/travel/2009/sep/30/wild-swimming-u...
(different context but anyway:) The new album ranges across a well-trodden landscape of rock to folk to country – seasonally, too, with songs like Summer Of John Wayne to Best Winter – with a full band in evidence.
http://www.chroniclelive.co.uk/entertainment-in-newcastle/mu...
East Anglia is rightly acknowledged for its rich artistic heritage, stemming back to the days of the Norwich school of painters in the 1800’s. Two hundred years later, beneath the surface of this well-trodden landscape, the astute art collector can discover the presence of a number of art practitioners producing an exciting and diverse range of artworks within this East-Anglian landscape.
http://www.art1821.com/exhibitions.php
Bandit Roads: Into the Lawless Heart of Mexico (Book) by Richard ...
29 May 2009 ... 'Erudite & street-smart... that rare thing: a travel writer who not only amuses & informs but also reappraises a well trodden landscape with ...
www.waterstones.com/waterstonesweb/products/richard.../6297...
The author of the award-winning Break Away tells a cracking tale in this well-trodden landscape. Reece (Oliver Gilbert) is a shady youth who has fled from Portsmouth to Liverpool and befriended Blake (Adam Redmore), a loser with no prospects and a baby on his hands
http://www.whatsonstage.com/reviews/theatre/london/E88312257...
Although the river flows through a tame, well-trodden landscape, once you are in the water, sunk below the pathes, roads and signposts, central England looks wild. You are surrounded by thick green English countryside.
http://www.guardian.co.uk/travel/2009/sep/30/wild-swimming-u...
(different context but anyway:) The new album ranges across a well-trodden landscape of rock to folk to country – seasonally, too, with songs like Summer Of John Wayne to Best Winter – with a full band in evidence.
http://www.chroniclelive.co.uk/entertainment-in-newcastle/mu...
East Anglia is rightly acknowledged for its rich artistic heritage, stemming back to the days of the Norwich school of painters in the 1800’s. Two hundred years later, beneath the surface of this well-trodden landscape, the astute art collector can discover the presence of a number of art practitioners producing an exciting and diverse range of artworks within this East-Anglian landscape.
http://www.art1821.com/exhibitions.php
Bandit Roads: Into the Lawless Heart of Mexico (Book) by Richard ...
29 May 2009 ... 'Erudite & street-smart... that rare thing: a travel writer who not only amuses & informs but also reappraises a well trodden landscape with ...
www.waterstones.com/waterstonesweb/products/richard.../6297...
The author of the award-winning Break Away tells a cracking tale in this well-trodden landscape. Reece (Oliver Gilbert) is a shady youth who has fled from Portsmouth to Liverpool and befriended Blake (Adam Redmore), a loser with no prospects and a baby on his hands
http://www.whatsonstage.com/reviews/theatre/london/E88312257...
Note from asker:
| Thanks for your help |
Discussion
¡Oh arisca cadena de montes robustos!
Enebros balsámicos, estepas y pinos;
silos que negrean bajo el encinar,
soleada ardiente que besa el pinar.
Saludos