Feb 1, 2013 09:21
11 yrs ago
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un sistema estatal más cercano
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Social Sciences
Government / Politics
governance (Chile)
Would this be 'a more open system of governance'?
Además, el marco de implementación de REDD+ propuesto, se basa en los principios del accionar del gobierno de Chile y en los objetivos estratégicos de la Corporación Nacional Forestal, los que permitirán asegurar la apropiación del proceso y la implementación efectiva de este:
Transparencia en las acciones de la Corporación, como parte de la Agenda de Probidad y Transparencia que promueve **un sistema estatal más cercano,** generando nuevos espacios para la participación y mejorando las exigencias de rendición de cuentas de la gestión pública del Estado de Chile.
Además, el marco de implementación de REDD+ propuesto, se basa en los principios del accionar del gobierno de Chile y en los objetivos estratégicos de la Corporación Nacional Forestal, los que permitirán asegurar la apropiación del proceso y la implementación efectiva de este:
Transparencia en las acciones de la Corporación, como parte de la Agenda de Probidad y Transparencia que promueve **un sistema estatal más cercano,** generando nuevos espacios para la participación y mejorando las exigencias de rendición de cuentas de la gestión pública del Estado de Chile.
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David Ronder
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a more accessible system of government/governance
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I might also reformulate the whole phrase 'que promueve un sistema estatal más cercano' as simply 'that seeks to make government more accessible' or similar.
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Glad it was helpful!
I might also reformulate the whole phrase 'que promueve un sistema estatal más cercano' as simply 'that seeks to make government more accessible' or similar.
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Glad it was helpful!
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| Yes, I did exactly as you suggested! |
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Comment: "Thanks, David!"
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Simon Bruni
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a government system / state administration that is closer to the public
I think you need to add "to the public" in English to make it clear.
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Cristina Gonzalez
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a more approachable government system
...as "cercano" is being used here like "accesible"
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Nikki Graham
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Thanks, Nikki. :)
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Richard Hill
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Thanks, Rich. :)
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Alicia Rodriguez
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Thanks, Alicia. :)
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a more user-friendly state system
"User-friendly" used to be state-of-the-art, but perhaps it's old hat now...
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We've already mentioned "transparency", so I'd avoid beating the reader over the head with too much reiteration.
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We've already mentioned "transparency", so I'd avoid beating the reader over the head with too much reiteration.
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a more responsive state system
Una opción adicional.
¡Suerte! :)
¡Suerte! :)
Discussion
"Accessible" might also work, conveying more of the sense of "cercano".