Jun 19, 2004 10:01
19 yrs ago
English term
mingled moonlight
English to Chinese
Art/Literary
Poetry & Literature
Rilla looked very sweet when she met Ken in the mingled moonlight and vine shadows of the big veranda.
TIA
TIA
Proposed translations
(Chinese)
| 4 +2 | another suggestion |
SHbreeze
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| 4 +1 | 月色透过斑驳的藤影 |
Xiaoping Fu
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| 4 | 月光与...混杂的光线下 |
Wenjer Leuschel (X)
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| 4 | 借题发挥 |
jyuan_us
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Proposed translations
+2
1 hr
Selected
another suggestion
月光与藤影交融，光影斑驳
对于这样的体裁，这样的情景，我一般比较侧重于“意译”，但有时怕“随意发挥”过多，反而得不偿失，贻笑大方。这里的译法，仅供参考。望行家不吝指正:)
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Note added at 14 hrs 46 mins (2004-06-20 00:48:29 GMT)
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题外话：这样一句，忽然就让我想起了那支
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Note added at 14 hrs 51 mins (2004-06-20 00:53:15 GMT)
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（sorry)多年前的校园民谣《恋恋风尘》:\"...你迎风吟唱,露水挂在发梢,结满透明的惆怅....\"
对于这样的体裁，这样的情景，我一般比较侧重于“意译”，但有时怕“随意发挥”过多，反而得不偿失，贻笑大方。这里的译法，仅供参考。望行家不吝指正:)
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Note added at 14 hrs 46 mins (2004-06-20 00:48:29 GMT)
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题外话：这样一句，忽然就让我想起了那支
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Note added at 14 hrs 51 mins (2004-06-20 00:53:15 GMT)
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（sorry)多年前的校园民谣《恋恋风尘》:\"...你迎风吟唱,露水挂在发梢,结满透明的惆怅....\"
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Comment: "thank you all."
9 mins
月光与...混杂的光线下
That is "the mingled moonlight and vine shadows of the big veranda."
10 hrs
借题发挥
月光照在藤架上，穿过婆挲的叶， 洒出斑驳的影。
+1
15 hrs
Xiaoping Fu
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月色透过斑驳的藤影
以上几位的译文各有千秋，都很优美。我也来凑个热闹。
“郦拉与肯恩在游廊上相遇。月色透过斑驳的藤影，照得她娇美可人。”
“郦拉与肯恩在游廊上相遇。月色透过斑驳的藤影，照得她娇美可人。”
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Wenjer Leuschel (X)
7 hrs
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