Aug 22, 2002 23:36
21 yrs ago
English term

I'll lool around in my damp coat and soak up this foray into wickedness...

English to Russian Art/Literary
It is a paragraph from a book. Two women are talking, one of them (Mrs H) is very upset, for she has just quarrelled with her husband.
'Not coming out to have a drink with me?'asked Mrs M.
'I'm having one,' I pointed out.
'So you are. But that's not the same as going down the pub and having a knees-up with the locals.'
'I'd just as well avoid it.' she reached for another cigarette. 'I don't feel up to facing the madding crowd right now; now don't go looking put out. I'll lool around in my damp coat and soak up this foray into wickedness'
'I hate it when you go talking posh'.

I'm afraid I dont quite get the last phrase of Mrs H :(.
And what is 'posh' in this context?

Thank you in advance
Proposed translations (Russian)
4 ...
5 +1 by way of explanation...
3 +1 *
3 not for grading !!!
2 nonsense

Discussion

Non-ProZ.com Aug 25, 2002:
-- to Ksenia:
I wish I knew more context((.
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to Dan: I recognized that 'from the madding crowd' allusion to Hardy ;) But thanks for mentioning it anyway.
And thank you for explaining it all)
xeni (X) Aug 23, 2002:
I'm afraid more context is needed...something about their quarrel...otherwise damp coat just makes no sense.
Non-ProZ.com Aug 23, 2002:
lool=loll Sorry, that's a typo ))

Proposed translations

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to loll around = to be lazy or idle

in my damp coat - это чтобы передать состояние души, когда всё плохо: идет дождь, в кармане пусто, в сердце отчаянье, т.е. feel miserable.

soak up = to take in or accept mentally, especially eagerly and easily (e.g. soak up the gossip) = впитывать что-то как губка.

foray into = a venture outside one's usual area (e.g. an actor's foray into politics). неожиданный крен в...

foray into wickedness в этом контексте похоже на что-то вроде "экскурс в зону зла".

В переводе надо постараться придать фразе ту самую литературщину и высокопарность (to talk posh), в которой собеседница заклеймила Mrs. H.

Я закутаюсь в своё отсыревшее пальтишко и буду одиноко бродить, упиваясь воспоминаниями о перенесённых страданиях.
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13 mins

nonsense

In this context posh means "nonsense." Are you sure about "lool?" If it's "loll," it means lie around lazily not doing anything. Otherwise, I can't help you much. Good luck.
Peer comment(s):

neutral Libero_Lang_Lab : Elizabeth - don't think it strictly means "nonsense", though I see what you're getting at - pretentious tosh...poetic drivel, poetic nonsense...
15 hrs
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21 mins

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мне кажется, что как-нибудь так:

"я уж лучше как-нибудь в одиночестве погуляю и похнычу. глядишь, когда вся насквозь от слез промокну, эта ярость из меня наконец выйдет."

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talking posh probably means выпендриваться or говорить высокопарно, but lets wait for somebody else to explain this one to us, since I'm not sure. :)))

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Note added at 2002-08-22 23:59:46 (GMT)
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ага, то есть, одна сказала: \"все пропало, пойду на помойку, объемся огрызков\", а другая ей ответила: \"хорош пороть чушь\". дивно. :)))
Peer comment(s):

agree Libero_Lang_Lab : Zmejka - you've explained it pretty well yourself.
14 hrs
спасибо :))
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22 hrs

by way of explanation...

it all makes sense, but why someone has given you this extract as a test translation is beyond belief Olwen...

The tone of Mrs H is mildly sarcastic and ironic in a way that only the British seem to manage. Her last phrase translates as follows:


"I'd prefer not to go to the pub' she reached for another cigarette. 'I haven't got enough energy to be around lots of people right now; but don't look so upset. I'll be quite happy to hang around at home, having a really fun time (NOT)'

The irony being that spending an evening at home on your own is far from wicked.

By talking posh he means, that Mrs H is waxing poetic - using lots of fancy, long words. Again it sounds a little ironic.


NB "madding crowd" is a phrase borrowed from the title of Thomas Hardy's novel "Far from the...." which has now become a standard turn of phrase in English.


Peer comment(s):

agree xeni (X) : Thanks for explaining it, Dan! However it sure can and will be translated only I won't even try after my first failure :(
43 mins
go on... have a go... i know you can do it!
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23 hrs

not for grading !!!

А, была-не была! Еще одна попытка.

Буду сидеть дома, разведу сырость и опущусь на самое дно порока.

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Note added at 2002-08-23 23:59:19 (GMT)
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Да, а posh-то:

Не люблю я, когда ты заумь всякую несешь.

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Note added at 2002-08-24 00:06:21 (GMT)
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Нет, лучше:

Не люблю я, когда ты начинаешь говорить красиво.

Так, все, пора завязывать, а то, боюсь, сегодня мне во сне приснится англичанка в мокром пальто на помойке :)
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