在伊丽莎白一世女王多年的经营下，英国终于加入了竞争者的行列。
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| 5 | joined the race to become one of the riches. |
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joined the race to become one of the riches. Explanation: the riches: 有錢人, 需為複數. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 20 mins (2012-09-27 15:21:09 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- 以及定冠詞. |
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4 days confidence: 
Please see below Explanation: The meaning is generally right, but it feels likes something is missing. I think the whole section (including the sentences before and after this one) may need to be re-structured in English, for it to make more sense, and read naturally. How you do this is entirely up to you. However, I can give two small pointers: 1. You don't need to use the word 'Britain' twice. (and) 2. Have you mentioned what 'this race to riches' is, in the previous sentence? |
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