during the course of which

English translation: yes

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English term or phrase:during the course of which
Selected answer:yes
Entered by: Crystal Samples

17:02 Nov 28, 2007
English language (monolingual) [PRO]
Bus/Financial - Human Resources
English term or phrase: during the course of which
"It is for this reason that XXXX will organize a 3-day seminar for all the top managers, during the course of which various instructional methods will be used."

Is this correct grammar???
Crystal Samples
United States
Local time: 17:47
yes
Explanation:
Absolutely fine.
Selected response from:

Mark Berelekhis
United States
Local time: 18:47
Grading comment
Thanks!
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



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5 +10yes
Mark Berelekhis
4 +7It's correct grammar, but why "the course of"?
Jack Doughty


  

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3 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +10
yes


Explanation:
Absolutely fine.

Mark Berelekhis
United States
Local time: 18:47
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
Thanks!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Marie-Hélène Hayles: yes, it's perfectly correct, although "during which" is equally correct and avoids redundancy.//It's a matter of style - I hate redundancy and avoid it at all costs! Others prefer a more flowery style.
2 mins
  -> Thank you, Marie. I reckon it's because the seminar is 3 days, and 'during' or 'over the course of which' kind of stretches it out, in a good way. Myself, I'd use 'over the course of which.'

agree  Mehmet Hascan: It’s perfectly correct as it is, though it seems a bit wordy and redundant.
12 mins
  -> Thank you, Mehmet. You're with Jack then :)

agree  Claire Chapman
1 hr
  -> Thank you, Claire.

agree  Sinead --: I actually like Jack's answer too, but the question was whether the grammar was correct and it is.
2 hrs
  -> Thank you, Sinead.

agree  Sophia Finos (X)
5 hrs
  -> Thank you, Sophia.

agree  Cilian O'Tuama: perfectly correct
1 day 10 hrs
  -> Thank you, Cilian.

agree  V_Nedkov
1 day 20 hrs
  -> Thank you, V.

agree  ARTES
2 days 2 hrs
  -> Thank you, ARTES.

agree  Alfa Trans (X)
4 days
  -> Thank you, Marju.

agree  orientalhorizon
5 days
  -> Thank you, oriental.
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4 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +7
It's correct grammar, but why "the course of"?


Explanation:
"During which" would mean exactly the same.

Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
Local time: 23:47
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 46

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Marie-Hélène Hayles: snap!
1 min
  -> Thank you.

agree  Mehmet Hascan: spot on!
11 mins
  -> Thank you.

agree  Alexander Demyanov
21 mins
  -> Thank you.

agree  Shera Lyn Parpia: you could also say "where" instead of "during which" , shortening it further.
1 hr
  -> Thank you.

agree  Sophia Finos (X)
5 hrs
  -> Thank you.

agree  V_Nedkov: both ok, just the first one has too heavy construction
1 day 20 hrs
  -> Thank you.

agree  orientalhorizon
5 days
  -> Thank you.
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