Apr 23, 2022 09:42
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Spanish term
endurecerse con la fama
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I would like to know the best translation of this phrase from Latin American Spanish into American English.
Translator colleagues from Spain, feel free to send me your suggestions as well. This is a translation about Mythology. Is okay to translate it as his heart hardened with the fame?
It's about the story of Theseus and the Minotaur of the Greek Mythology.
I hope that all of you are healthy and safe from Covid19.
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Al poco zarpaba del puerto incendiando los barcos cretenses y dirigiéndose hacia el mar abierto con la cabeza envuelta en un trapo. Ariadna se fue con él, le amaba, desde el primer momento en que le vio le amaba, pero se dio cuenta de que su corazón empezaba a endurecerse con la fama. Tenía ante si el sangriento trozo de vela que cubría la cabeza de su hermano...
Translator colleagues from Spain, feel free to send me your suggestions as well. This is a translation about Mythology. Is okay to translate it as his heart hardened with the fame?
It's about the story of Theseus and the Minotaur of the Greek Mythology.
I hope that all of you are healthy and safe from Covid19.
Here is the full paragraph for your review:
Al poco zarpaba del puerto incendiando los barcos cretenses y dirigiéndose hacia el mar abierto con la cabeza envuelta en un trapo. Ariadna se fue con él, le amaba, desde el primer momento en que le vio le amaba, pero se dio cuenta de que su corazón empezaba a endurecerse con la fama. Tenía ante si el sangriento trozo de vela que cubría la cabeza de su hermano...
Proposed translations
(English)
3 +4 | realized that fame hardened / was beginning to harden his heart | Ana Vozone |
3 +1 | realized that fame was beginning to turn him into a hard-hearted individual | Barbara Cochran, MFA |
Proposed translations
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realized that fame hardened / was beginning to harden his heart
Example sentence:
Pharaoh for his fame hardened his heart, From the fruits of Israel he would not part
Into the wilderness Israel escaped Pharaoh with hardened heart,
Note from asker:
Thanks Ana. I was thinking the same. I read this part of the old testament. |
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realized that fame was beginning to turn him into a hard-hearted individual
Or "realized that fame was beginning to make his heart as hard as steel".
https://www.usingenglish.com/reference/idioms/heart of steel...
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Note added at 1 hr (2022-04-23 10:53:08 GMT)
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Or simply, "was beginning to make him hard-hearted".
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Note added at 1 hr (2022-04-23 10:55:12 GMT)
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Or the much less literal "was beginning to turn his heart to steel".
https://www.usingenglish.com/reference/idioms/heart of steel...
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Note added at 1 hr (2022-04-23 10:53:08 GMT)
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Or simply, "was beginning to make him hard-hearted".
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Note added at 1 hr (2022-04-23 10:55:12 GMT)
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Or the much less literal "was beginning to turn his heart to steel".
Note from asker:
Thanks Miss Cochran! |
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