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...were included...

English translation: ...were added to the treatment

GLOSSARY ENTRY (DERIVED FROM QUESTION BELOW)
English term or phrase:...were included in the treatment
Selected answer:...were added to the treatment
Entered by: Piotr Fras

11:49 Jun 20, 2007
English language (monolingual) [PRO]
Medical - Medical: Cardiology
English term or phrase: ...were included...
Any better idea than "were included"?

"Due to increasing signs of the low cardiac output syndrome, pressure amines were included to the treatment."
Piotr Fras
Poland
...were added...
Explanation:
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Mike Gogulski
Slovakia
Local time: 22:42
Grading comment
Thank you!
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



SUMMARY OF ALL EXPLANATIONS PROVIDED
5 +6...were added...
Mike Gogulski
3Whole lot of other ways
jccantrell


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1 min   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +6
...were added...


Explanation:
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Mike Gogulski
Slovakia
Local time: 22:42
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
Thank you!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Els Spin: Yep, this is the simplest solution.
18 mins
agree  Angela Dickson (X)
1 hr
agree  Jack Doughty
1 hr
agree  Neyde: I agree with Angela's remarks.
2 hrs
agree  liz askew
3 hrs
agree  Elena Aleksandrova
3 hrs
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
Whole lot of other ways


Explanation:
Get rid of the passive voice:

... the treatment also incorporated pressure amines.
or

An increase in the signs of low cardiac output syndrome led the treatment to include pressure amines.

Treatment included pressure amines because of an increase ....


Of course, if you just want a synonym for "were included" then I agree, Mike's is the shortest way around this.

jccantrell
United States
Local time: 13:42
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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