Glossary entry (derived from question below)
German term or phrase:
Wohlfühlraum
English translation:
My Own Special Space/Place - Children's Rooms
Added to glossary by
Ramey Rieger (X)
Dec 15, 2021 08:46
2 yrs ago
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German term
Wohlfühlraum
German to English
Marketing
Furniture / Household Appliances
Heading for a website selling accessories for nurseries/children's bedrooms:
WOHLFÜHLRAUM KINDERZIMMER
Needs to be kept short, as a heading. Grateful for any snappy ideas that don't sound to corny or long-winded (as mine do at the moment)
WOHLFÜHLRAUM KINDERZIMMER
Needs to be kept short, as a heading. Grateful for any snappy ideas that don't sound to corny or long-winded (as mine do at the moment)
Proposed translations
(English)
3 +2 | My Own Special Space/Place - Children's Rooms | Ramey Rieger (X) |
4 +2 | A feel-good space for your child | Lancashireman |
4 +1 | happy place | Cillie Swart |
2 +2 | Petite retreat | Alison MacG |
3 | cosy children’s rooms | Brent Sørensen |
Change log
Dec 15, 2021 12:13: writeaway changed "Field" from "Art/Literary" to "Marketing"
Dec 21, 2021 10:02: Ramey Rieger (X) Created KOG entry
Proposed translations
+2
23 mins
Selected
My Own Special Space/Place - Children's Rooms
Perhaps
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18 mins
cosy children’s rooms
Room Accessories: Creating Cosy Children's Rooms
https://www.gltc.co.uk/blogs/make-a-happy-home/room-accessor...
Peer comment(s):
neutral |
Johannes Gleim
: Would work with verbs like 'create a' cosy place/room, but this was not meant in the headline.
6 hrs
|
+1
5 hrs
happy place
another option
Peer comment(s):
neutral |
Johannes Gleim
: The place is not 'happy', but the child may be happy inside the room.
1 hr
|
agree |
Cilian O'Tuama
: Objector has much clue.
12 days
|
+2
5 hrs
German term (edited):
Wohlfühlraum Kinderzimmer
A feel-good space for your child
https://www.google.com/search?q="a feel-good space for "&oq=...
1) Seven chars longer, but still manageable.
2) I think the second person possessive 'your' adds personal appeal.
3) Wohlfühl > feel-good (OK in marketing context and sticks closer to the original)
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Note added at 5 hrs (2021-12-15 14:22:40 GMT)
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FEEL-GOOD SPACES FOR KIDS
Same number of chars as the original (25)! Depends on how tolerant you are of 'kids' for 'children'.
1) Seven chars longer, but still manageable.
2) I think the second person possessive 'your' adds personal appeal.
3) Wohlfühl > feel-good (OK in marketing context and sticks closer to the original)
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Note added at 5 hrs (2021-12-15 14:22:40 GMT)
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FEEL-GOOD SPACES FOR KIDS
Same number of chars as the original (25)! Depends on how tolerant you are of 'kids' for 'children'.
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Johannes Gleim
: 'feel-good place or space' is sufficient. For context translation you can add 'for childen'.
1 hr
|
agree |
Cilian O'Tuama
: Wird immer grotesker.
12 days
|
+2
1 day 10 hrs
Petite retreat
You probably can't use this, but it does at least fulfil the short and snappy remit.
Want to create a petite retreat for your little one? Check out our Bianca #kidsbedroom collection.
https://twitter.com/havertys/status/983041824846761986
PETITE RETREAT
Part play zone, part sanctuary, the bedroom plays a central role in every child's life. Here's how to get it right.
https://www.pressreader.com/uk/the-herald-magazine/20090411/...
Want to create a petite retreat for your little one? Check out our Bianca #kidsbedroom collection.
https://twitter.com/havertys/status/983041824846761986
PETITE RETREAT
Part play zone, part sanctuary, the bedroom plays a central role in every child's life. Here's how to get it right.
https://www.pressreader.com/uk/the-herald-magazine/20090411/...
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Lancashireman
: Elementary sanctuary, under-age hermitage, heavenly haven
16 hrs
|
agree |
Brent Sørensen
: This would make for a sweet headline
2 days 18 hrs
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