Feb 8, 2009 19:02
15 yrs ago
Italian term

a far da contraltare al percorso del protagonista

Italian to English Art/Literary Cinema, Film, TV, Drama
This is talking about a film. I'm having a hard time translating this phrase and would like to know if someone has any ideas. I've posted my own translation as well.

The sentence in Italian:
Non solo, a far da contraltare al percorso del protagonista, la drammatica vicenda di un ragazzo che, allora come oggi, si lascia sedurre dagli eterni vizi del mondo Ambizione e Potere e perde se stesso.

My translation:
And not only, it’s the dramatic, timeless tale of a young man, rivalling that of the protagonist, who allows himself to be swept away by the eternal worldly vices of Ambition and Power, losing himself in the process.

Proposed translations

+3
15 mins
Selected

as a counterpoint to the hero's journey

In my opinion, contraltare carries a connotation of a competing alternative (moral in this case), a form of contrast rather than competition
Peer comment(s):

agree Elettra Franchi : Even though I think this is an excellent translation, I would like to give other suggestions instead of "counterpoint" : "in contrast with" or "counterbalanced by" or "as a mirror to".
13 mins
agree Sele
3 hrs
disagree Dr Lofthouse : 'as a contrast to'? As in a sub-plot to the main story? Tend to think Tom's suggestion is closer to the mark
5 hrs
agree Marzia Nicole Bucca
15 hrs
agree luskie : I'd phrase it differently, I guess, but I'd use "counterpoint" too
2 days 19 hrs
Something went wrong...
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
24 mins

counterbalancing the progress of the [main] protagonist

a possible alternative. "Progress" in this case not necessarily in the utilitarian sense of "getting better"; simply "progressing", i.e. going forward from one thing to another.
Something went wrong...
3 hrs

a young anti-hero

I.e., And not only, it’s the dramatic, timeless tale of a young anti-hero, who allows himself to be swept away by the eternal worldly vices of Ambition and Power, losing himself in the process.

More economical and keeps the gist, ...cioè penso...
Something went wrong...
Term search
  • All of ProZ.com
  • Term search
  • Jobs
  • Forums
  • Multiple search